Re-drafting: Analyse the Summary

Is this a useful way of thinking about the summary statement…?Circle diagram showing the components of the template used in the summary

Or perhaps this is useful…?

The summary would perhaps read like this…

…Something in the real world is now better because of these (three) changes, which we brought about through these (two) pathways, mobilising our research into the real world…

(The numbers of changes/pathways in this example are arbitrary but there is something satisfying about them).

How does this approach connect with the ‘Using Key Sentences’ workshop?

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